♥ Wednesday, March 05, 2008
Are you wondering why there is a big picture of an oreo here?
The trainee teacher is teaching us students about narrative writing. And the exercise that he gave us to make our writings more intresting is non other than the oreo!
So u must be thinking what can we describe about the oreo? It is dark brown in color and it has white vanilla filings. So i'm using my sense of sight.
The teacher gave us free oreos! So good!
Okay, let me apply the "oreo" skills i learn today.
I am going to describe a room. Yes, a ROOM.
Here goes....
Sunlight filtered through the thin cracks along the wall barely lighting up the dim, hazy room. The air was still and motionless. Nothing stirred. Running my fingers along the slimy walls filled with moss and vines i groped my way in the semi-darkness, trying to make out the shape of the room i was in.
Right. Okay. So how did i do? Can u kind of guess what kind of room i am in?
I Lay every burden down, at the foot of the cross